Friday, 18 December 2009

Violet Chapter 11: Karma Bites

Authors Notes on the Chapter.

KARMA BITES! And it sure did in this chapter.

Okay, so this chapter was pretty fucked up, wouldn't you agree? I must admit that when I was writing this I was even shocking myself with the whole Jasper thing.

However, there was a reason as to why I wanted to fuck all the characters up in this chapter. They've all been living a bunch of lies and its left them all like... "what the fuck do I do now?" (Sorry if I use 'fuck' to often - I'm often like this after just writing EPOVs)

So, a little feature came to mind when I was bored. Lo and behold, here are the


"FUCK-UPS OF VIOLET"



EDWARD FUCKING CULLEN

Where do we start with him? He's so scared of showing his emotions; especially for a girl. We all know he's absolutely besotted with Bella, so why can't he just get over it and tell her rather than be so complicated and upset everyone just to get it across that he may be vaguely interested in her body? He's seen what's happened to Jacob - and that's upset him because they used to have such fun together with the club and now he's been left on his own. I will also reveal a bit of Edward's family lif in a later chapter. He's just afraid to let go - he doesn't want to hurt Bella. But it's all coming back round and biting him in the ass. He needed a wake-up call hence the COMPLETE fucking up of Edward in this chapter.


BELLA 'FLOWERGIRL' SWAN


Well, she's quite simple. She's always been the 'boring' school teacher with a long term boyfriend and one best friend. Now, she's unemployed, just found out her partner of eight years has been cheating on her, and the person she found herself starting to fall for has turned out to be a complete manwhore. Okay, so she knew that from the beginning but just when she thought he was different, she's been proved wrong. Now she's drunk, gone home with 'Blondie' and just performed an outstanding striptease at the most prestigious club in New York. Fucked up, much? She just needs to find someone she can trust - and Edward needs to sort his shit out and show her that he can be right for her. Just how is he going to do it?



JASPER

So he's been bossed around by his boss Edward fucking Cullen for far too long. He's been pretty stressed trying to organize the perfect night for the re-opening of Violet and then out of the blue he just gets sacked for literally no reason. And to top it all off, his boss is fucking the girl that he's in love with AND she's chosen to stay with her job rather than stay with him! Fucked up shit right there. So he's REALLY pissed and is trying to get his revenge by taking advantage of off-her-face-drunk Bella in front of Edward and near Alice. The thing is with Jasper - he just wants to be loved. And everyone is fucking him around and he's had enough. Don't worry, he's too in love with Alice to do anything with Bella.

ALICE
We don't know a lot about Alice yet, just that she's a stipper at Violet who is one of Edward's favourite 'office-workers' and she's having an 'affair' as Edward would refer to it as with Jasper. She loves her job and is very well paid however she wants to be with Jasper but she's too attached to her job and intimidated by Edward to leave and be with Jasper. Now she is stuck with the regret of not going with Jasper, but will she stick the job out for much longer with the way Edward is behaving? Hopefully if Edward gets his head out of his ass soon then she won't have to make such a harsh decision. Roll on Violet Chapter 12.





So there we go! They're all fucked up - but there's something good out of this. They've all hit rock bottom and there's only one way to go from there ... UP! So the next chapter will be happier!

Next time on Violet:

Bella wakes up and finds herself in Jasper's apartment not remembering anything from the night before. Edward enlists Jacob's help to sort himself out but still keep his lifestyle and club intact. Alice has to make a decision about Jasper and will Bella forgive Edward after what Jasper has told her?

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A bientot, mes chers. Bondgirl xxx

2 comments:

  1. Ahhh, I knew she wouldn't sleep with Jas! Cheers!

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  2. awww thank you so much for clearing the air!
    I must admit that I was a bit shocked with the ending of the chapter and I was really worried that bella would sleep with Jasper..that would really mess things up for everyone!
    So I just hope that that little incident was a strong wake-up call for Edward to start getting his life back together and go after Bella in order to win her over!

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